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I'll keep you dry by *Emerald-Eden:iconEmerald-Eden:

Categories Fan Art > Manga/Anime > Digital > Movies/TV

©2009 *Emerald-Eden
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I like this one more than my last couple drawing because i'm still starting to get the hang on how to draw people and i'm trying my hardest to improve :) This took maybe 5 hours :| I know theres something wrong with Konans head, It just dosn't seem to look right to me

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=TheALMs May 20, 2009, 11:33:50 AM
First off, I love Pein and Konan's expressions, they're so calm, yet I can see strong feelings for one another on both of their faces. You've got the shadowing down preatty good, I only recommend that you make the shading more noticable in both of their Akatsuki outfits. You were successful with the rain, and I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this drawing! But, I noticed on you profile page that you wanted this recommended for a DD. To get a DD, your work has to be original or if not, it has to be waaaay awesome (a whole lot better than I can do). This is really a beautiful picture, but if you want a DD, you need to add a whole lot of detail. I wouldn't worry about that though, because this is already awesome, you did an excellent job on it!
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~xXShigurexChanXx May 18, 2009, 7:06:02 PM
So I can't leave a comment where I tell you what you need to improve on?

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~Ashenwisp May 18, 2009, 7:55:03 PM
Um...I see not why critique should be valued more by those with subscriptions than those without. I have seen many amazing artists who wish not to pay into deviantArt for the various perks such as as Journal CSS, writing and asking for critiques, as well as artists who are lesser in ability that have subscriptions.

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*Emerald-Eden May 19, 2009, 7:53:05 AM
whut? O-o

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~xXShigurexChanXx May 19, 2009, 10:23:00 AM
The fact that I don't have a subcription doesn't mean I'm not any good of an artist and can't give you any advice that would help your art. Someone of us can't have a subcrition, or can't afford it. We're talented people on here. Subcriptions are just extra features and really have nothing to do with art. I don't need to pay DA to be a good artist or to give artistic advice. There are things you could improve on with this piece and your last piece.

*sigh* Just needed to get that rant out, it's been bugging me since I posted my first comment.

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*deidaraXterra May 19, 2009, 1:33:36 PM
Good job e-e!!!!! I :heart: it!!!

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"Love...is it life or death? Emotions, I seem not to be familiar with them. Some say my heart is dark,because I have none. Amore E Morte, is what I recall. Love or Death, Life and Love. It seems we must learn all."-- Lera Tsubaki-The Moon
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*Emerald-Eden May 19, 2009, 5:16:04 PM
:| i never said you were a bad artist, i would just perfer the critiques that get my art attention

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Please commssion me ^^ I need the extra money to go towards a new computer :love:

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~Ashenwisp May 19, 2009, 5:17:37 PM
Shigure-chan pretty much got out what I wanted to say with her second comment.

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~xXShigurexChanXx May 19, 2009, 5:20:47 PM
That sounds extremely selfish. If you want people to look at your art seek the advice of people who actually know what they're talking about and can give you advice to how to improve so your art actually looks better the next time around. Subcriptions mean nothing but you have extra money for fancy features. Subcriptions aren;t going to get you reconized. -_-

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~xXShigurexChanXx May 19, 2009, 5:25:19 PM
Thanks. I glad someone else sees the problem in that. I know her personally too, that's the sad thing.

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